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E-Zine #165
June, 2006

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I'd like to extend a warm WELCOME to all our new subscribers joining us...

Our featured report this month comes to you compliments of fellow Canadian, Michel Fortin. It's titled "Forget Benefits And You Will Sell More" - you do not want to miss this.

I highly recommend you read the report on how to get more out of Google Adwords in our "Feedback & Contributions" section. These tips can make a big difference on your bottom line.

And if you've ever thought about trying to put one past google, then you might be wise to check out this month's Food For Thought.


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Forget Benefits, And You Will Sell More

What's the single, most important element in copywriting?

Let me say it another way.

You've done your research. You found a starving market. Your product fills a need. And your sales copy shines with benefits. If everything is so perfect, then why is your product still NOT selling? Is it the price? The offer? The competition?

Maybe. But not necessarily.

The fact is, these things are not always to blame for being unable to sell an in-demand product, even with great copy. In my experience, I believe it has more to do with one thing:


(Or the lack thereof.)

In fact, the greatest word in copywriting is not "free." It's "focus." And what you focus on in your copy is often the single, greatest determinant of your copy's success.

In my experience, copy that brings me the greatest response is copy that focuses on:
1. One messsage
2. One market
3. One outcome
Here's what I mean...

1. One message

The copy doesn't tell multiple, irrelevant stories. It doesn't make multiple offers. It doesn't go on tangential storylines or provide extra pieces of information that don't advance the sale.

It makes one offer and one offer only. Too many messages confuse the reader. And as copywriter Randy Gage once noted, "The confused mind never buys."

It confuses them because they don't know which offer provides them with the best value for the amount of money they are ready to spend.

Prospects want to spend their money wisely, and that's the point: lose focus, and it is harder to think clearheadedly as to make a wise decision in the first place. Remember this axiom:

"Give people too many choices and they won't make one."

You don't want to do what my teenage daughter does to me. When we go shopping for a dress, after hours of flipping through hangers and racks, she finally pinpoints one she likes, goes to the changing room to try it on, looks at me and asks, "How's this one?"

"Perfect!" I say. "You sure, dad?" She asks. "Yes," I add. "I'm positive." "OK, then." So she puts her own clothes back on, walks out and we head to the cash register when, suddenly, she stops, picks up another dress off the rack, and says, "How about this one? Or maybe this one? Oooh, look at this other one!"

2. One market

I don't want to spend the little space I have for this article to extoll the virtues of niche marketing. But it goes without saying: trying to be all things to all people is impossible. And when it is possible if ever, then your message (your copy) must be generic enough to appeal to everyone, causing the majority in your market to feel you're not focused on them.

(There's that word "focus," again!)

People feel kind of left out, because you're too vague. You appear indifferent or focused on "someone else's" situation, when you are able to cater to their specific needs and goals, too.

If you cater to a large, diversified market, I would highly encourage you to at least segment your market. That is, write copy for each individual and targeted group of people within your market. If your market is made up of 2, 3, 4 or more identifiable market groups, write copy for each one - even if the product is the same for everyone.

3. One outcome

"Click here," "read my about page," "here's a link to some testimonials," "call this number," "fill out this form," "don't buy know, just think about it," "here are my other websites," "here are 41 other products to choose from," and on and on...


When people read your sales copy, and if your copy is meant to induce sales, then you want one thing and one thing only: get the sale! In other words, there's only one thing your readers should do, and that's buy.

Remember K.I.S.S. (i.e., "keep it straightforwardly simple").

You would be surprised at how many salesletters I critique where the author asks the reader to do too many things, to choose from too many things, or to jump through so many hoops to get the very thing they want in the first place.

Your copy should focus on one call to action only. Forget links to other websites or pages that are irrelevant to the sale. Why invite procrastination with too many calls-to-action?

In fact, I truly believe that, with web copy, the goal is not to elicit action but to prevent procrastination. Because if people hit your website, whether they found you on a search engine, were referred to you from someone else's website or email, or read about you somewhere, then they are interested right from the get-go.

So your job is not to get them to buy, really. They're qualified.

So rather, it's to get them not to go away.

Ultimately, focus on the reader. ONE reader.

This is probably the thing you need to focus on the most.

The most common blunders I see being committed in copy is the lack of focus in a sales message, particularly on the individual reading the copy and the value you specifically bring to them.

In my experience as a copywriter, I find that some people put too much emphasis on the product, the provider and even the market (as a whole), and not enough on the most important element in a sales situation: the customer.

That is, the individual reading the copy at that very moment.

Don't focus your copy on your product and the features of your product - and on how good, superior or innovative they are. And don't even focus on the benefits. Instead, focus on increasing perceived value with them.

Why? Because perception is personal. It's intimate. It's ego-centric.

Let me explain.

When you talk about your product, you're making a broad claim. Everyone makes claims, especially online. "We're number one," "we offer the highest quality," "it's our best version yet," etc. (Often, my reaction is, "So what?")

And describing benefits is just as bad.

Benefits are too broad, in my opinion. You were probably taught that a feature is what a product has and a benefit is what that feature does. Right? But even describing benefits is, in my estimation, making a broad claim, too.

The adage goes, "Don't sell quarter-inch drills, sell quarter-inch holes."

But holes alone don't mean a thing to someone who might have different uses, reasons or needs for that hole. So you need to translate benefits into more meaningful benefits.

You see, a claim always looks self-serving. It also puts you in a precarious position, as it lessens your perceived value and makes your offer suspect - the opposite of what you're trying to accomplish by making claims in the first place.

Therefore, don't focus on the benefits of a certain feature. Rather, focus on how those features specifically benefit the individual.

There is a difference.

A big difference.

The more you explain what those claims specifically mean to the prospect, the more you will sell. It's not the features that counts and it's not even benefits. It's the perceived value. So how do you build perceived value?

The most common problem I see when people attempt to describe benefits is when what they are really describing are advantages - or glorified features, so to speak. Real benefits are far more personal and intimate.

That's why I prefer to use this continuum:

Features > Advantages > Benefits

Of course, a feature is what a product has. And an advantage (or what most people think is a benefit) is what that feature does. But...

... A benefit is what that feature means.

A benefit is what a person intimately gains from a specific feature. When you describe a feature, say this: "What this means to you, Mr. Prospect, is this (...)," followed by a more personal gain your reader gets from using the feature.

Let me give you a real-word example.

A client once came to me for a critique of her copy. She sold an anti-wrinkle facial cream. It's often referred to as "microdermabrasion." Her copy had features and some advantages, but no benefits. In fact, here's what she had:
  1. It reduces wrinkles.
  2. It comes in a do-it-yourself kit.
  3. And it's pH balanced.
  1. It reduces wrinkles, so it makes you look younger.
  2. It comes in a kit, so it's easy to use at home.
  3. And it's pH balanced, so it's gentle on your skin.
This is what people will think a benefit is, such as "younger," "easy to use" and "gentle." But they are general. Vague. They're not specific and intimate enough. So I told her to add these benefits to her copy...
  1. It makes you look younger, which means you will be more attractive, you will get that promotion or recognition you always wanted, you will make them fall in love with you all over again, they will never guess your age, etc.

  2. It's easy to use at home, which means you don't have to be embarrassed - or waste time and money - with repeated visits to the doctor's office... It's like a facelift in a jar done in the privacy of your own home!

  3. It's gentle on your skin, which means there are no risks, pain or long healing periods often associated with harsh chemical peels, surgeries and injections.
Now, those are benefits!

Remember, copywriting is "salesmanship in print." You have the ability to put into words what you normally say in a person-to-person situation. If you were to explain what a feature means during an encounter, why not do so in copy?

The more benefit-driven you are, the more you will sell. In other words, the greater the perceived value you present, the greater the desire for your product will be. And if they really want your product, you'll make a lot of money.

It's that simple.

In fact, like a face-to-face, one-on-one sales situation (or as we say in sales training, being "belly to belly" with your prospect), you need to denominate as specifically as possible the value of your offer to your readers.

In other words, express the benefits of your offer in terms that relate directly not only to your market, but also and more importantly:
  1. To each individual in that market
  2. And to each individual's situation.
Don't focus on your product. Focus on your readers. Better yet, focus on how the benefits of your offer appeal to the person that's reading them. And express how your offer benefits your prospect in terms they can intimately relate to, too.

Look at it this way:
  • Use terms the prospect is used to, appreciates and fully understands. (The mind thinks in relative terms. That's why the use of analogies, stories, examples, metaphors and testimonials is so important! Look at "facelift in a jar" I mentioned earlier, as an example.)

  • Address your reader directly and forget third-person language. Don't be afraid to use "you," "your" and "yours," as well as "I," "me," "my" and "mine." Speak to your reader as if in a personal conversation with her.

  • Use terms that trigger their hormones, stroke their egos, tug their heartstrings and press their hot buttons. You don't need to use puffery with superlative-laden copy. Just speak to your reader at an intimate level. An emotional level.
Because the worst thing you can do, second to making broad claims, is to express those claims broadly. Instead, appeal to their ego. Why? Because...

... We are all human beings.

Eugene Schwartz, author of Breakthrough Advertising (one of the best books on copywriting), once noted we are not far evolved from chimpanzees. "Just far enough to be dangerous to ourselves," copywriter Peter Stone once noted.

He's not alone. My friend and copywriter Paul Myers was once asked during an interview, "Why do people buy from long, hypey copy?" His short answer was, "Human beings are only two feet away from the cave."

(Speaking of Eugene Schwartz, listen to his speech. It's the best keynote speech on copywriting. EVER. Click hear to listen to it. You can also get a copy of his book, too, called "Breakthrough Advertising." I read mine several times already.)

People buy for personal wants and desires, and for selfish reasons above all. Whether you sell to consumers or businesses, people are people are people. It's been that way for millions of years.

And nothing's changed.

Your message is just a bunch of words. But words are symbols. Different words mean different things to different people. Look at this way: while a picture is worth a thousand words, a word is worth a thousand pictures.

And the words you choose can also be worth a thousand sales.

. . .

About the Author:
Michel Fortin is a direct response copywriter, author, speaker and consultant. Watch him rewrite copy on video each month, and get tips and tested conversion strategies proven to boost response in his membership site today at http://TheCopyDoctor.com/ today.

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Hi Dan,

I've been telling my online clients (and closest friends) for years now to use Google AdWords to bring in a steady, predictable stream of hot pay-per-click traffic.

It's infinitely more efficient and reliable than search engine optimization or any of the latest Web marketing gimmicks out there.

But here's the kicker: If all you do is follow the advice Google gives you in the AdWords "how to do it" tutorials... you can get butchered financially. They have some decent basic advice, and good tools... but when it comes to using AdWords for maximum profit, most of Google's advice simply sucks.

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Warning! You Can’t Fool Google

Almost daily, I see a report about a company or individuals who is trying to fool Google through SEO. When are they going to learn that you just can’t fool Google? Why would you even want to try it, with when you risk being banned from the biggest search engine in the world? Many people seem to try just because they wonder if it could ever be done. As a general rule of thumb: it can't!

There are some instances in which people think that they have tricked google. They believe that something that they have done has rocketed their site to the top of Google's listings and they truly believe that they have managed to "stick it to the man."

Nine times out of ten when this happens they either performed an SEO procedure that Google allows or even endorses or they just happened to fill Google's criteria better than other sites in their category without even realizing it.

Once in a while someone will actually come up with a way to fool Goggle. They will be enjoy a nice high spot on google's listings for maybe even several months, but then the end comes for these proud sites. As soon as Goggle notices that it has been cheated, these sites are removed from the index; sometimes permanently.

The fact is that these people don’t understand the power that Goggle has. Anyone with a real interest in making money from the web should consider that getting banned from the search engines effectively removes your site from the web. They don’t have to let you back in, and they don’t have to give you any right to respond - you’re entirely at their mercy. You don’t want to get in their bad books.

Aside from the fact that Goggle will remove you from its listings, there is another incentive against trying to fool Goggle. If you fool Goggle, you are fooling your clients. There is no reason to try to lure visitors onto your page expecting to get something and really giving them something else. This is a poor way to conduct business and more often than not it will chase the customer away for good.

If you want your website to be found in categories that don’t apply to it, try purchasing ads on pages that are listed towards the top of the Goggle listings in these categories. You can actually increase your sites reputation in Google’s eyes rather than hurting it by adding another link to your site. This is an excellent form of marketing because it allows you to reach out beyond your market simply by dishing out a few dollars a month.

Some of the most popular methods of trying to fool Google's PageRank system are link farms and link exchanges. Link farms are basically websites that exist only to get links to specific sites counted by the search engines.

Link exchanges are groups of websites that each pay a monthly fee to link to each other - like link farms, only more expensive and dodgy. In both cases, the websites involved are attempting to climb the ranks of Google's search results through the sheer quantity of links to them - this is known as Googlebombing. But it doesn’t always work.

Goggle knows that cheaters can ruin their search engine for the rest of us. After all, if link farms inflate the rankings of less- useful Websites, then we’ll all start seeing worse search results. That’s why Goggle constantly updates PageRank to keep those kinds of sites away. The Page Rank formula that Goggle implements is mysterious and ever changing. This is the primary reason that Goggle cannot be fooled.

It has been found recently that Goggle is now sending out ‘cloak bots’, disobeying robots.txt to find out whether sites are ‘cloaking’ - serving a different page to search engines than what visitors see. These ‘cloak bots’ are controversial but seem to have some positive effects on the Google’s results.

Unethical methods make it difficult for people who are trying to do SEO the proper way, which is one of the reasons why it needs to be monitored so carefully. If people stopped trying to find ways to manipulate the system, it would be much easier to keep up with what’s going on.

As you may already know, Goggle publishes a list of guidelines suggesting legitimate ways to improve a site's ranking, by making it more accessible and better. One of the tips is to make pages for users and not for search engines. You’d do well to listen to their advice.

Cody Moya writes about Search Engine Optimization in his free 50 part Big SEO Course. You can sign up for his free Big SEO Course and get additional information at his website: http://www.bigseocourse.com

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